The creation of all creations
wet soil,
to dampen its skin
smells of rain,
trickle in
fertile ground
appeases its ripeness,
and slumbering currents
awaken to forces
provocative layers
give liqours to sip
inviting the hand
and blinding the mouth.
Author notes
e c l a i r l u v
A contest entry
- in celebration of my one year on AP! :) by etoile.
2250 points, ended April 29, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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what a nice way to describe a favourite fruit!
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this is wonderful. I love all the imagery and I like the background colour in relation to the title. this is a great poem.
goodluck and thanks for entering my contest
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wow..i really like this poem. The whole journey of something so simple as a plum.
provocative layers
give liqours to sip
this is my favorite line =]
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