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Bowing Down

Religion never meant a thing,
the fat buddha
has nothing to smile about.

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Picture Prompt: 13 words exactly

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  • SilentMoonlight
    October 1, 2008

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    I've read so many 13 words poems they never cease to amaze me; I could never write one. I love imagery and detail too much.

    Good for you for touching on religion; so an iffy subject for anyone to talk about. For straight an to the point, and lets the reader know exactly what you're talking about.

    Great job!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 1, 2008
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    Intriguingly grasping... x