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Lost Arts



Hang the fish
to dry in sun
tis the season
the salmon run








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Prompt ~ picture above
by Harry Palmer

A contest entry

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    That time of year.. as they leap from the rivers
    a lovely short poem hun
    Best wishes in the contest
    Julie


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 1, 2008
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    So unique and catchy... x


  • charcoal
    October 1, 2008
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    love it


  • ZachP gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    wow... so very simple, yet absolutely beautiful. I think sometimes that what you've done here is a lost art -- capturing a lot in just a few words ]


    thank you for sharing, friend, and good luck in the contest.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    Great work! Fantastic imagery - I hope you take the gold!! (Tis the season this poet wins!!!)

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