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Destinations

Sometimes we must journey, reasons unknown
and leave behind those we have held dear
it's not a matter of wanting to be alone
not a lack of compassion or for fear

sometimes we just need some time to grow
to take chances in our lives, looking for tomorrow
while those who love us await our return

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i hope you come back soon

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  • Violinstrings silver member
    October 3, 2008

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    this is beautiful

    this is well rhymed still keeping a good meaning
    it is like a card for anyone not just blooming poet
    your words are convincing and not harsh and deals with life.


  • Flowergirl
    October 2, 2008
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    very nice piece i loved it great work keep up the great writing...