Colours of a dream
spinning step by step
each spoak, as colourful as the beam.
Clinning on so we don't forget,
the times where life was so bright
I'd rush to get on and stay
It was always such a delight
I would of stayed on all day.
The sudden rush of excitment
of the bright colours
and the assignment.
Assignment of over comming fears.
The fear from heights
had a sudden rush of blood
which can only fly me up higher than a kite.
And only land down In a pile of mud.
The colours always shine through
and I no longer search for something new.
Author notes
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This was hard for me to do as i tried to steer away from my usual writes.
A contest entry
- The Color Washed Out Of The Rainbow ™ by Ignis Corpus.
425 points, ended October 25, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think about this poem? :f
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I liked how you steered away from your usual writes. I will say. I think I have given you one of the hardest pictures in this contest so far, but I'm glad I did. You made this into a master piece with words. Though I did notice you capitalized every line. In some places there is no need for it. I loved it. I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
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Hi I recieved your message and you havn't commented on my poem twice so here's my link.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4642683
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Thanks!
It's not like any of my usual writes, I found it refreshing and a little bit hard to write. But im always up for a challenge. I'll fix what neeeds fixing.
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I liked this alot! I am terrified of heights, so I guess I could relate, I enjoyed reading this alot.
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Thanks i wrote this for a contest it was hard, i used the prompt below....
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http://media.photobucket.com/image/colorful%20or%20colorfull/cutejpink/zzzz3wh4.jpg work with this one.
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