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Passions of the Sky

Dark sky is painted with the colors of turned off stars
Clouds move around in the sky- constantly changing
Hiding flickers of light- seeming smaller than a fingerprint

Breeze wanders aimlessly reaching out to treetops
Picking up a leaf for flight or dropping it back down
Jam-packed with directions- not knowing where to go

Silver crescent shines alone in a darkened sky
Self conscious of her flaws- part of her hides away
Only aware of how striking the other lights are

Soft gentle air- whispers of friendship and loyalty
Betray the tough exterior threatening to crack
From far away no one can see anything wrong- no tears

Moody and pmsing the moon is seen different each night
Switching from confident and full to a sliver of her former self
Rotating visions so no one can sense a pattern and figure her out

More lights shine tonight portraying the smiles- meaningful gifts
For a second everything crashes to a standstill- staying true to self
Dust settles to the ground- grey sketched clouds breathe for a moment

Author notes

Thursday Prompt: Look at the weather outside where ever you are. Write a poem including that ttype of weather in your poem RELATING to what you're feeling. :]

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    November 12, 2008

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    This is very beautifully written. I could picture all this in my mind. I really enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest


  • Anu-Nataraj
    October 13, 2008
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    Soft gentle air- whispers of friendship and loyalty
    Betray the tough exterior threatening to crack
    From far away no one can see anything wrong- no tears

    i loved that part the best !

    uve got a l;ovely way with imagery...

    much love

    god luck in the contest !!

    Anagha-Nataraj