Dark sky is painted with the colors of turned off stars
Clouds move around in the sky- constantly changing
Hiding flickers of light- seeming smaller than a fingerprint
Breeze wanders aimlessly reaching out to treetops
Picking up a leaf for flight or dropping it back down
Jam-packed with directions- not knowing where to go
Silver crescent shines alone in a darkened sky
Self conscious of her flaws- part of her hides away
Only aware of how striking the other lights are
Soft gentle air- whispers of friendship and loyalty
Betray the tough exterior threatening to crack
From far away no one can see anything wrong- no tears
Moody and pmsing the moon is seen different each night
Switching from confident and full to a sliver of her former self
Rotating visions so no one can sense a pattern and figure her out
More lights shine tonight portraying the smiles- meaningful gifts
For a second everything crashes to a standstill- staying true to self
Dust settles to the ground- grey sketched clouds breathe for a moment
Author notes
Thursday Prompt: Look at the weather outside where ever you are. Write a poem including that ttype of weather in your poem RELATING to what you're feeling. :]
A contest entry
- Personification ! Come One ! Come All ! by Anu-Nataraj.
450 points, ended October 20, 2008, 16 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-writes and Fresh Writes Contest by FloridaGatorQueen.
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Comments
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This is very beautifully written. I could picture all this in my mind. I really enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest
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Soft gentle air- whispers of friendship and loyalty
Betray the tough exterior threatening to crack
From far away no one can see anything wrong- no tears
i loved that part the best !
uve got a l;ovely way with imagery...
much love
god luck in the contest !!
Anagha-Nataraj


