Ah...The cool wind,
the smell of icy salt water that will give you
hypothermia if you stay in it for more than ten minutes,
the sand between your toes, and--is that-? It is!
Oh my gosh! Don't worry! I'm coming!
You're lucky I was here. I saved you from that wave.
Ouch!
Ungrateful crab!
Author notes
Another 55-word fiction I wrote. This one was not presented to the class (or really anyone else 'cept for Mom and my friend)
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Happy Birthday OrangeMarmalade!
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Comments
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LOL! this is fantastic!
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Lol, what a crazy twist from the beginning to the end. Really caught me off guard. Well done. ^_^
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you miss-spelled ungrateful.
lol, I liked your other 55 fiction better, but this one is funny.
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>.< meck. Thanks.
Yeah, I liked the other one better, too (which is why I read the other one), but I enjoyed the idea of this one.
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