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Reason

Tell me the reason;
why you love me.
Whats the reason?

Is this just a game for you,
that you want for enjoyment.

Do you want to marry me,
and forever be happy together.

Do you just want quick lovin,
from me and every girl.

I want to know the reason.
Why you LOVE me.

How can it be better I know i need something

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  • JOaNnA eLiSe
    December 29, 2008
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    yayyyyy

    that is so sad but has so much truth && reasoning to it . i love it


  • kitty23
    December 3, 2008

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    good job
    I like this one it's good but short.

    well I have wondered theses things myself but just except they love you and not push it lol

    thank you for sharing
    love you
    kitty


  • Ryan79
    November 21, 2008

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    Great peom.

    I think that everyone wonders this once in a while. Poeple are afraid of being hurt or if their lover is being honest. Lots of feeling in it. It's great.


  • Lisa.
    October 16, 2008
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    wow this is a realy good poem


  • PromiseMeLies
    October 4, 2008

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    Hmm, Sis. First off, you don't ask someone why they love you, its simple. They love you because they need/ want, or just plain do love you. Tal is correct. Its the only answer that doesn't take forever to say. And one thing, love. You're 15, don't worry about marriage until a long time in the future. I know how you feel, cause I've felt the same before. But we're young, we need to live life and have fun. We'll get our hearts broken along the way, but one day we'll find the right one. So until then, stop worrying why they love you and enjoy the fact that they actually do love you.
    This was a bit mellow for what you asked, I wish you had put more emotion into it. Give it more depth. More love from you to them, confusion. Stuff like that. It was a good poem over all though.
    Love ya Keep writing,
    Ivy.

  • SoldiersRain
    October 4, 2008

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    Basic question = basic answer. "Why do you love me?" = "Because I need to love you". It's the answer I gave my fiancee and the only one I have that takes less than two hours to explain. I think this is a good piece, but since you asked for how it can be better, I would suggest adding more depth to it and a metaphor for the love in said piece.

    Tal.


  • ShadowWeaver
    October 1, 2008
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    wow, i like this. it asks the question that all girls want to know the answer for. good write sis

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