They say my life looks so easy,
but there isn't an easy thing about it.
I work, I pray, I eat, I sleep, I suffer, I have heartache
I get up at dawn and one more day time takes its toll.
One day will be my last,
when that day comes life then will be easy.
How can it be better I know i need something
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i never said it was easy. you made my life harder.
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*cries*
this is amazing ! but it is SO sad! it makes me think , i love you to death gurlieh && you being gone for more than a week made me go wild nuts hehe . seriously , your amazing , your life might be good when your gone but youd instantly make mine HELL
nice poem
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It's good. It sseems really sad though. It's kinda short too.
As for a suggestion, I would recommend describing why you suffer, what is the cause of it, give more details and be more discriptive.
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good!!!
true but not true.....after you die there is judgement . Where they decide wether you go to heaven{a great place} or Hell { the place of eternal suffering}
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Hmmm, I like this one a lot. Once again more depth and description I would suggest, but that may just be because that's sort of my style. Very nicely done. I didn't realise you were Ivy's sis. I'm close to her too.
Tal.
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