She sauntered through the narrow door.
I made her a delicious melted S’more.
And she beamed with pale golden hues.
I couldn’t help but smell her shoes.
The fire was lit with orange burning logs.
Good God, I had to go let out the dogs!
Tension was high, I was getting so hot.
The ceiling was wet and was starting to rot.
Long stemmed candles were lit and glowing.
My bladder was full and my pee was flowing.
It was so romantic and loving that night,
I ended up taking a left instead of a right.
So that’s my story and I’m sticking to it.
I haven’t been drinking so, no, I’m not lit.
And if you didn’t know, my name is Lenny,
I’ve got ADD - look a shiny new penny.
Author notes
A Non-Sensical Rhyming Poem
In a list
A contest entry
- The Art Of Words by Poetess12.
2400 points, ended October 14, 2008, 22 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LOl You did a wonderful job with this dear and I'm still smiling. Congratulations on the golden cup.
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Congratulations on your big win! Lots of points potentially means lots of exposure for your work on the "Featured" column. Give yourself a big "WooHoo!!!" from me!
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Yes that was nonsensical for certain. It made me laugh which I am sure was the intention. Thanks for the laughter and smile.
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Creative and humorous capture of the way the distracted mind can play hopscotch, and the way it skips some sequential squares! Especially when the little timers go off, to remind us to let out the dogs IMMEDIATELY! Nicely rhymed.
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This poem made me laugh. I enjoyed reading it. It's great.
Thank you for your entry.
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great rhymes..made me laugh!
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Lol Just loved this! As nonsensical as it gets and a great read that really put a smile on my face!
Great sense of humour flows through this.
All the best in the contest
Gaylene
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Cute Poem!!!!!!!!
This was silly and funny and a delight to read. Brought a much needed smile to start the day.
Thank you for sharing your talent and sense of humor with us. You take care.
Sandy
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Sweet
this piece is so cute, i loved it! and without an image too well done! good luck in the contest!
Rend
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great job, sis! I needed a laugh this morning, wonderful story had me going up until the ending. best of luck in the contest.
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LOL
Long stemmed candles were lit and glowing.
My bladder was full and my pee was flowing.
It was so romantic and loving that night,
I ended up taking a left instead of a right.
Brilliant I love it..
The whole poem
Best wishes in the contest
Julie
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this definitely had me laughing. Not sure if you meant that but it did. Good job
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