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Dominic

Something drew me to you,
A sort of melancholy harmony between us that was immediate,
Deliciously cynical.
And two broken pieces came to be a solved puzzle of words and longing,
while distance kept us fond and anxious.
I kept myself away for the longest time,
A decade's worth of moments, shoved inside a nine month tedium.
Until I saw what such absence turned me into.
So you were there all along, not particularly impatient while I pondered and kept you waiting.
Even then, it was blatant and solid.
That the two of us,
Sad and somber,
Could find a smile
Solace,
And mend.

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  • Erica Carnea
    October 27, 2008

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    love this
    'And two broken pieces came to be a solved puzzle of words and longing,'
    love always erica carnea
    xxx