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Rambling




I've traveled the span of the Boulevard
from the upscaled through less fortunate parts

Mostly o'er the bridge, to walk by the beach;
like when Danny was little, especially in evenings

He would run the sidewalk happily
stopping to play with each parking meter

Sometimes we'd eat in the tourist quarter;
maybe Flanigan's by the water

Once or twice tried to drown some sorrows
at the seaside bar

Always had passed by Constitution Park;
but, like most folks, didn't pay much notice.


So just the other day, I stopped there;
to discover pink blossoms spinning in mid air

Amidst Purple Glory, yellow
Sunshine trees, Flame of the Forest

I found myself in the finest arboretum
I could ever wish to be in!

Natural beauties I'd never seen;
Rainbow Eucalyptus' multicolored bark

A Lipstick tree, in this wonder-filled park,
with deep red seeds in fruit

Screw Pine's aerial stilt roots,
exotic, pineapply fruits.


Then, I found the Asoka tree;
if one sits under it, twas told to me
your worries will be relieved

But to tell the truth
by the time I reached this Asoka,
my worries already felt fewer

It started to rain then,
before I'd finished my tour

Which, for you my reader, is
something to be thankful for

The park holds 300 species
or more, from five continents

If I'd have stayed longer,
this poem would NEVER end. 

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  • Samplette gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    I liked this piece very much...not the ending so much by bringing reference to the poem, but I did enjoy it. Thank you for entering.
    Sam


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    I would not have left,
    stayed right with your words
    as you examined all 300!

    This is indeed an Olivia paradise,
    colorful life to live on in your words!!!


  • FreeTara
    October 1, 2008

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    This is a beautiful positive poem and 300 species wow! your worries would have been gone after that!!
    nicely done and all stanzas are great!!


    • Simply Olivia
      October 1, 2008
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      "Whoever loves and understands a garden will find contentment within."
      - Chinese Proverb


  • Vickie J
    September 30, 2008

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    lol...300 species-wow! You're right, you may have had a hard time winding up your visit. Nicely done, btw

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