I remember the first
time you said hello,
that's when I knew
I could never let you go.
I knew it was true
because you looked at me,
yes, you talked to me,
and you walked with me,
that's how I knew
I was meant for you.
We started off as friends,
and unfortunately nothing more,
finally we both decided this
was a feeling we couldn't ignore.
I knew it was true
because you looked at me,
yes, you talked to me,
and you walked with me,
that's how I knew
I was meant for you.
We started dating,
and slowly our affection inclined.
Soon, anyone who didn't know we
were together, had to be blind.
I knew it was true
because you looked at me,
yes, you talked to me,
and you walked with me,
that's how I knew
I was meant for you.
We took a few breaks,
but always remained a pair,
no one else's relationship
could ever compare.
I knew it was true
because you looked at me,
yes, you talked to me,
and you walked with me,
that's how I knew
I was meant for you.
We got married young,
and had three children.
You died at age ninty-two, I hope to
soon follow so we can be together once again.
I knew it was true
because you looked at me,
yes, you talked to me,
and you walked with me,
that's how I knew
I was meant for you.
Author notes
For DanielleNicole...option 1 <3 <3
Missa
A contest entry
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600 points, ended October 5, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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very heart felt! i love all the emotion in this poem you have penned! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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i really like your poem
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josie
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Very sweet. I like the repetition to a degree, but maybe you should break it up a little more. Overall however, I love the way it's just a sweet, feel good piece, offering a realistic view of the perfect love that everyone wants.
Thx for entering my contest! :]
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this was so beautiful, and I think your refrain just adds to that.
thanks for entering
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wow a love that lasts a lifetime that is always a great thought. i loved it.
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Thank you for your beautifully worded entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Good Write!
I like it. The simple repetition is a good flow to it. I like how talking, and walking is repeated, a lets someone see a couple holding hands, walking down the road and being the happiest people in the world. Thank you!
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awww thats really sweet!
thanks for entering!
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Awe, such a lovely write..
my favorite part was "We started off as friends,
and unfortunately nothing more,
finally we both decided this
was a feeling we couldn't ignore"
That so reminded me of the first time i met " him"
Wow thanks for sharing this..
and the repetitive use of your words was great..
thanks for making me smile.. good luck in the contes.
-Mandi
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thanks!
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This is terrifically done, both happy tears and sad tears i shed here
Well done great work!!
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awww this is beautiful yet so sad I'm sorry this happened if this is true you did a really terrfic job expressing yourself so much emotion<3 great flow this made tears fall from my eyes this is just so beautiful it touched my heart :} good luck and god bless my friend
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haha. no this didn't happen. i'm only 15. lol! i just made it up.
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Haha well damn you're good at it good luck and thanks for sharing
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