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sombrely searching (silver)

Missing image



She sombrely searches
ripple and bubble

of cascade’s basin
for the self she lost
allowing herself be

carried away on love’s whim
until finally drowning in

self made fool’s bliss

Author notes

Visual: “The Autumn Lagoon” by frozenstarro

30 words

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  • paperparadox silver member
    November 7, 2008

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    Hood-Winked!

    Congratulations, dear Poet, on being ambushed by the Poetic Bandits! I truly hope this mass visitation will bring a smile to your face and a renewed energy to your work.

    Kind of reminds me of the Lady of Shallotte (hope I spelled that right!)...so sad and whistful. Nice intertwining of imagery and metaphor here.

    Good stuff! Happy to have stopped by today...


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    Wonderful take on the prompt! Stunning word choices that have brought this picture to life!
    All the best with this.
    Gaylene


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    Always a big mistake to lose ourselves completely to someone else...
    Wonderful take on the pic!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 30, 2008

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    You went into the picture and brought the essence to life so wonderfully

    Stunning!
    best of luck
    ♥
    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda