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These Words

I’m very confused,
Bruised,
Misused.

Betrayed,
Afraid,
As trust begins to fade.

I feel forgotten,
Neglected,
Rotten.

Hated,
Despised,
Not to mention over-sized.

I can get so depressed,
Obsessed,
Stressed.

Insane,
Strain.
Never able to explain.

Each day brings frustration,
Aggression,
Temptation.

These words describe my  life,
These words describe me.

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Just something quick and random I did...

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  • PANDAmonium
    October 1, 2008

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    Well Carrie, for being your first poem posted in a long while, it is good. Although I must say a few things. 1st, you are never forgotten. How could anyone ever forget such a caring person with such a sweet and tender heart? And also, you're not over sized -.- You're perfect. and you know I love you. With every beat of this heart of mine and with every breath in my lungs. *kisses* Never forget that.

    With all the love that I have,
    Eternally Yours,
    Justin