To span a gap in time, or what you will of it.
Beating a lead sap off a wall
is sort of fleeting, ain't it?
Yet, it is all a round way
of saying little.
Make your dust ramble in the dirt
otherwise, what fun is there?
As for watching nature
as nature watches you
a dinner bell has rung somewhere...
Your it.
Gotta make the best of it now, eh?
Author notes
Quote: Art is what you can get away with-- Andy Warhol
A contest entry
- Andy Warhol Quote by Naridill.
1100 points, ended October 28, 2008, 11 entries
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Let me know How this makes you feel, what do you think?
Comments
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Yes, nature, weird and most random, and very deftly and adroitly done poem... like it a ton! bravo... bravo...
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Has a very universal feeling to it. Using the word "ain't" threw me off a little, but I got back on track not long after...It was unexpected from you Robert...
This is very deep...Raises many questions...More than they have answers for, and I love it...
Three thumbs up!
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This makes me feel ponderous. It's odd, quirky and interesting. A great theme the use of time. Well penned.
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