Aimless, airless, abandon...
Make me feel you. Make me concerned for you.
Because right now, I will not bleed for you.
Right now, I do not pity you.
Right now, you are scum. Atrocious, obnoxious, revolting rat.
I don't love you. And for all anyone can tell I never did.
I'm giving up on you and taking my life back.
Because I deserve so much more than this. So much more than you.
You can't hurt me any more, because I don't care what you think.
You mean nothing to me anymore. I'm taking my life back.
Author notes
Idk... I kind of just wrote what i felt. I didn't start off with a general idea in mind, so it does seem sort of scattered...
A contest entry
- Give Me A Reason by Jasmine Rayne.
1750 points, ended October 14, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think!!!
Comments
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I like the idea you have here. Of taking your life back from someone who's destroyed it.
"Aimless, airless, abandon...
Make me feel you. Make me concerned for you.
Because right now, I will not bleed for you.
Right now, I do not pity you.
Right now, you are scum. Atrocious, obnoxious, revolting rat."
I can feel the hate radiating from your very core. I love that. :] Great job on this. Thanks for entering.
-Lily♥
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