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Hang On

And you can't run forever
Because someday it will all catch up
And I'm gonna need you to hang on
So just please hang on to me

And baby I know the pain
That will rip your heart in two
And I know that the ache
Might just kill you

And you can't run forever
Because someday it will all catch up
And I'm gonna need you to hang on
So just please hang on to me

And I'm sorry that your dieing
That nothing could be worth the pain
But I know you can survive this
Just remember it wont be this bad again

And you can't run forever
Because someday it will all catch up
And I'm gonna need you to hang on
So just please hang on to me

And as the ache dulls
You might feel the emptiest you have ever felt
But when you feel again
The warmth just might make you melt

And you can't run forever
Because someday it will all catch up
And I'm gonna need you to hang on
So just please hang on to me

It all gets better
I promise you it's so
And I love you,
Just letting you know

And you can't run forever
Because someday it will all catch up
And I'm gonna need you to hang on
So just please hang on to me

And you can't run forever
Because someday it will all catch up
And I'm gonna need you to hang on
So just please hang on to me



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  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 26, 2009

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    Excellent Lyrical Piece!

    Thanks for sharing here, this is great stuff!
    Very indepth, and something many can relate to!

    Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    October 2, 2008
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    thats cool. we shld mix something up on garage band for that. like acoustic-y


  • OldBear34 silver member
    September 30, 2008

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    Great Write!

    In the fourth stanza, line one, dieing should be dying. Other than that it has great rhythm, and the repetitive stanza throbs like an aching heart. I enjoyed reading it.