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Pressures of a child

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The Burden that comes,
With the children of today,
Is trying to be the best,
That they can be.

The peer pressure can be hard,
and the pressure that you,
Give yourself, to be the best,
For you parents, and make,
Them proud of you,
Not only for them,
But for yourself too.

It can really get the better,
of a teen or a pre-teen.

I should know this as,
All I've wanted to do,
All my life,
Is make my mum so proud.

So proud of me ,
And repay her for,
Bringing me up,
Single handed,
All by herself.

We can argue,
We can say we hate,
Each other but really.

We love each other,
And we are proud of,
Each other.

Every child can say,
Their mum is the best.

But my mum went through,
Hell and back for me.

And the pressure I give,
Myself to repay her for that,
Is phenomenal but some day,
I will really make her proud.

So proud she can point & say,
"That's MY daughter & she did this for me."

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  • Ken-Maverick
    October 12, 2008

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    OMG!!!
    Excellent write Karlie,
    But you know what Kaz is already proud of you,
    I see it when yous talk about each other, i bet
    you put a smile on her face when she read this though

    Pen on my friend, we are all proud of ya

    Ken


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    How wonderful a write this is

    I could so see her wings about you and yours about her for you both are such special people to care so very much and help each other is truly a blessing indeed . This brought tears to my eyes and such pride that their are still young people out in this world with such love and hope .Never let go honey never let go


    • Karlie67
      October 1, 2008
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      Awwww thank you tons, I'm really glad you liked it.
      Sorry for the tears
      xxx