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Homeless Street

The homeless street
with urchin rocks,
felt humbled to
the child's
rocky journey.

Author notes

picture prompt:
http://oki-oki.deviantart.com/art/imaginary-friends-84873128

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  • leander Moderators member
    November 1, 2008

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    What I really like about short poetry of this kind is that you actually managed to paint some beautiful imagery with just a few words.

    Thank you for entering the contest!
    Leander

  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 8, 2008
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    This is so beautiful, you jammed this full of such beautiful imagery. best to you int the contest
    • haley27 gold member
      October 8, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment. Haley27

  • Iridessa MoonFlower Greeters member
    September 30, 2008

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    This was very sort. But packed with powerful words. Thank you for sharing you work here with us. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~

    • haley27 gold member
      September 30, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my short poem. I'm glad you liked it. Haley27

  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 30, 2008

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    Superb plus

    A very fine write. You've expressed yourself quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us. It also reminds me of my series on The Homeless. Here's a link:

    http://allpoetry.com/list/57521-Homelessness

    . Rewarded 4

    • haley27 gold member
      September 30, 2008
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      Thank u

      Thank you so much for the wonderful comments given to my poem. Haley27
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