Her eyes,
colourful to the core,
revealing powers never seen before;
of blue, of pink, of green
of so much more,
than what seems.
Her eyes,
a witchy enchantress,
sitting in cold darkness,
though when you get close to her,
all you feel is warmth and happiness.
Her eyes,
a beauty, rarely seen,
rarely noticed, and rarely sought.
gaze into her eyes,
and forget this world,
feel epiphany and euphoria..
Like never felt before..
Gaze into her eyes,
feel her power,
her strength,
and live…
by: Nada Adel Sobhi
Author notes
this is my pic prompt: http://media.photobucket.com/image/colorful%20or%20colorfull/888lostaddict888/colorfuleye.jpg
I did not intend to rhyme at first.. it just came out like that..
A contest entry
- The Color Washed Out Of The Rainbow ™ by Ignis Corpus.
425 points, ended October 25, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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good job.
keep writing like this. good work. -
Wow. That was hypnotizingly beautiful. I just loved this. And you have a beautiful name, might I add. Your real name.
Congratulations on your shiny gold!
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Pretty!
"gaze into her eyes,
and forget this world,
feel epiphany and euphoria..
Like never felt before.."
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Wow.........wow.............wow.......... AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Enchanting lines! They go well with the picture. I like the enchantress part--how she is cold and dark, but you feel warmth and happiness near her--sounds like a formidable foe. Congrats on the gold.
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gr8 write :)
well, first, congratulations (i mean ur gold medal)
second, that one is like WOOW, perfectly chosen words and vivid imagery.. absolutely loved it.
Fav lines:
"Her eyes,
a beauty, rarely seen,
rarely noticed, and rarely sought.
gaze into her eyes,
and forget this world,
feel epiphany and euphoria..
Like never felt before.."
A well deserved trophy!
umm.. third: I realized earlier both of us were Egyptians, just wishing to know more about you, Nada
sherry
keep up the good writing
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Beautiful write! On a sidenote, your name is so cool! I love foreign and unusual names and yours rocks! Thanks for the share! Reminds me of the song "eyes" by Rogue Wave. Have you ever heard it? If not, go check it out....you'll like it!
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This is so pretty!
Her eyes,
a beauty, rarely seen,
rarely noticed, and rarely sought.
gaze into her eyes,
and forget this world,
feel epiphany and euphoria..
Like never felt before..
Favoritte Lines ^
Thanks for the inspiring write!
Gratz on the gold!
<3 Abi -
beautiful
amazing -
That is a beautiful poem. I love how you used her eyes to give her a personality. It is a magical poem. I love fantasy ^_^.
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wow
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So beautiful. I love it.
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Ah! Very lovely visuals. Nice word choice. Excellent flow.
Perfect interpretation.
Well done
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Wow, You did do a good job. I loved the lines, "Her eyes,/ A beauty, rarely seen,/ Rarely notices, and rarely sought." Amazing ones there. I'm glad you got this picture prompt. I noticed you capitalized every line. That isn't necessary. I wish you the best of luck.
Converse Queen -
http://media.photobucket.com/group/image/colorful%20or%20colorfull/5KJVXLP5NA/colorful.png?o=1085 I want you to write about this. I love it and adore it. Do something good with it.
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