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Louisianna

One of the best
times of my life
is saying good bye
good night and farewell

but i will
remember
this love of lifetimes

a memory to cherish
when i think of you

a lonely road to home i must go.

Author notes

I went to visit a dear friend of mine that i don't get to see very often(last time was 10 months ago) and this was a little something i came up with right before i left...i stayed the weekend with her, we had fun....i made alot of new friends while down there.

the last line is ironic...both coming and going from there there was no one on the road but me for about 2 different 60 miles stretches....
and i think i am done writing...this is the longest i have ever written for a notes section

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