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To Take this Breath

Mother Nature fighting
For her chance to breathe

Posions are intoxicating
Pesticides are swimming

Maybe thats why
There is Global Warming
Mother Nature was brooding.

Author notes

MMMMM... Global Warming.
Sounds yummie i could just eat it
(not really)

A contest entry

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 1, 2008

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    global warming

    has a lot of takes on it, the subject of nature shares its interests within the warming of the world...
    thank you for this entry, good luck
    Linda


  • billpoet silver member
    October 1, 2008

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    ah ha -

    well done - pretty much like my poem: The Bugs Are Plotting - http://allpoetry.com/poem/2761730 keep it up because I surmise you feel it


    • badnovocaine
      October 1, 2008
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      Im glad you liked my poem. I commented on yours, yeah now that iv read it, it does remind me of mine. Thats pretty cool.

      The only bad thing is when i entered the contest the person totally mistook the meaning behind the whole poem.
      Makes me wanna slap myself