I caught a baby pachyderm
entangled it with string
I attached it to a finger
and wore it like a ring
I caught a baby pachyderm
to remind me of some things
the only problem I encountered
was a trunk of static cling
I caught a baby pachyderm
...Or did it catch me?
Author notes
I used the contest picture as prompt but added a picture of my own.
I haven't wanted to delve into a serious/dark write so this was a fun break.
A contest entry
- "Sinking into a rising memory" by PatheticKt.
400 points, ended November 23, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Very cute... your gentle humor had me smiling all the way through and I loved the twist...
Well done...
Ken
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whimsical breaks are always fun
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I swear! Where the hell do you find these pictures!? You should make an album strictly dedicated to your random photos. lol
Yink
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I am glad my painstaking searches for such images pays off, ha.
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