it's 9:36 AM
and i'm up like a star,
coruscating as the earth
and my lively vigilance rotate
rare nocturnality:
i raise my arms as a planet,
when Venus, although a celestial symmetry
is expansive to the south
upon our globe
without a shadow of a telescope,
transiting my moonlit window
the scale of my nature-bred mood
is high today
among many camera worthy twinkles
if looking towards my section of the sky
In a list
A contest entry
- Catch a Smile by Samplette.
1500 points, ended October 15, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
If you can be kindly critical, then I might think about it
Comments
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A nice write. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Ah, morning... the best time of the day next to night.
Love the twinkles! 
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