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The Hand

I'm just the guy
who fixes the fence
Cleans up the yard
and helps with the tent

The animals here love me
Or so they have said
Perhaps it's because
I can make a good bed.

The days start early
And seem not to end
But I love every moment
And make lots of friends

Like Cheech, Ramsey
Jasi, and Lilly
And my favorite cat,
Ring tail Willy!

Now Kim is their guardian
And makes sure the works done
Before she lets anyone
Have any fun

So I keep it a secret
that I love what I do
But I think she knows
I'm more than just crew.

A contest entry

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  • storiesuntold
    October 17, 2008
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    This is lovely

    Very smooth piece here with a lot of love and care for the critters about you .


    • DennisP1
      October 17, 2008
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      Oh God,, laughing.. this was written just for fun. Certaily not one of my serious pieces.. I 'll send you a link to one of my better ones.

  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 10, 2008
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    Hi, what would you like to be in my family?

  • lianonsidhe silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    Aw! Every farm, zoo, stables etc should have a caring handyman like you! Great write!


  • summer51
    October 1, 2008

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    This is really a beautiful piece to share.

    Good luck to you!


    summer51


    • DennisP1
      October 1, 2008
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      Thanks my most lovely friend.. It was written for a friend just for fun.

  • Poet Muse silver member
    October 1, 2008

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    Beautiful Sentiments, Poet!!!

    Best of luck in the contest!!! Peace, Cyn


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    Geez, I WISH I had a helping hand like you around. It's just me and a few gals that sporadically show up. Love this little diddy. Nice rhyme! Thanks for entering my contest! I'm honored!
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