You don’t know
How I feel about this
The time with you
Is what I really miss
No I cant live
Without you any more
I want you to be there waiting
At those big white doors
So help me now
I can’t go on
Without you beside me
From dusk till dawn…
And I know
It may not last forever
But for now
I need you girl
For I need help
To know if this is love
And if this feeling
Is a gift from Above
This is a feeling I’ve never felt
And I don’t know why
But when I’m around you
I feel I could fly
Author notes
shadowsdream
A contest entry
- contemporary emotional personal poetry♥ by etoile.
575 points, ended October 19, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what is the wierdest part to you?
Comments
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this was nicely written, I'm not a big fan of rhyme but yours wasn't forced and it actually wasn't too bad.
this was a sweet write and I liked the ending.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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No I cant live
Without you any more
I want you to be there waiting
At those big white doors
cute.
cant --> can't
I don't personally like rhyme, but yours wasn't that bad.
nice write.
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screen-name in authors notes please.
and ill comment for real later
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