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The Universal Dance

The moon and sun
Combine to make one

They are ying and yang
Two halves of a sphere

One dark, one light
One day, one night

A love story kept secret
From all watching eyes

Watching from far
With envy are stars

They fall from the heavens
A sad yet beautiful thing

As they fall from grace
They go at such a fast pace

The dance of the universe
Is more beautiful than anything I’ve seen

There’s more to say
Let’s save it for another day

So for now I’ll rest
Till I can express my feelings

On this universal dance
That we call life

Author notes

u have my utmost permision to use my title. i wrote this with a heart full of awe about the world.

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  • Tercil gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    So for now I’ll rest
    Till I can express my feelings? mmm, how someone turns something human into a universal form, only you can do that. Nice title as weel, I sincerely thank you for beiong the only one who has put something down.


    • ShadowsDream
      September 30, 2008
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      thank you. i really enjoyed writting this. i was just filled with a sudden happiness and just had to express it!