The moon and sun
Combine to make one
They are ying and yang
Two halves of a sphere
One dark, one light
One day, one night
A love story kept secret
From all watching eyes
Watching from far
With envy are stars
They fall from the heavens
A sad yet beautiful thing
As they fall from grace
They go at such a fast pace
The dance of the universe
Is more beautiful than anything I’ve seen
There’s more to say
Let’s save it for another day
So for now I’ll rest
Till I can express my feelings
On this universal dance
That we call life
Author notes
u have my utmost permision to use my title. i wrote this with a heart full of awe about the world.
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best by Tercil.
300 points, ended October 14, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what is the wierdest part to you?
Comments
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So for now I’ll rest
Till I can express my feelings? mmm, how someone turns something human into a universal form, only you can do that. Nice title as weel, I sincerely thank you for beiong the only one who has put something down.

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thank you. i really enjoyed writting this. i was just filled with a sudden happiness and just had to express it!
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