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have you?

Have you ever seen
the colors of the rainbow
fall like falling rain.

Splattering
along the sidewalks,
into the flowing brooks.
Touching everything
and yet
leaving no evidence
that it had ever been there.

Have you ever seen
the many colors
of a rainbow
as the sky clears
and it welcomes
you to a better brighter day.

Have you ever wished
a bright and colorful rainbow
to appear
so you can walk under it
and all the treasures
can be found.

Have you ever...

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well I dunno.... I tried anyway

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  • rawrbby
    October 24, 2008
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    i like it! i think you did a great job with the picture


  • Ignis Corpus
    October 1, 2008
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    Awww this is cute. I liked how you used the rain and incorperated it into the window with rainbow droplets. Good job. Though I do think you could use more pucuation in places. The flow is a little off. Good general direction with this poem. I thank you for trying.
    Converse Queen

  • SoulWhispher
    October 1, 2008

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    Well done, this really captuares the intent of the contest, you have outdone yourself, great job, Blessings John