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Warriors Tale

Sorrows herald
A tale does tell
Of a warrior
Who never felled

Left on shores
Of captive sea’s
A nobler man
You’d never meet

Not a harsh word
Not a curse said
Though his sword and shield
He’d never shed

Every day
In foreign land
He’d look toward the sea
For his warriors noble band

Years did pass
And years did go
Still the warrior waited
Faithful, to go home

Now his years
Are old and gray
And still his blind eyes
Will ever stray

Homeward
Towards lush green grass
Until one day
They carried him back-

The blaze was great
The pyre was high
They scattered his ashes
Across land, sea, and sky

Now he’s finally
Reached his home
A place called Heaven
Is where he’s from

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  • SteveS gold member
    August 10, 2009
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    Very nice reflections by you for the person you write about. Well done.


  • azure85 gold member
    October 8, 2008

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    Very beautiful poem, that puts the heart in the right perspective, where the Eternal Home awaits for us. Thank you for such a beautiful poem.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 3, 2008
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    Sad and sweet to think about going home.