First,
a step forward
Another
and another,
A mile,
a fathom,
a distance no longer a measure
Rage filling every pathway, burning its entry
Coursing
Again
and again.
I’m on my way
Running now
Faster
and faster.
Can you hear me coming?
Dying now and panting out breaths
Harder
and harder.
My eyes stare at the glossy sky
Losing their light, fading grey
I never thought, this would be my last day.
Descending
Deeper
and deeper.
The edges of life
Blurred by the arriving corners of death.
Worries and fears all gone.
Lifted away.
My poor little heart,
Beats
and beats.
Working so hard to keep me here.
I wish to tell it stop.
That there’s no reason to panic.
Soon I’ll be with you again.
Running towards the darkness,
So I can find you
And say, “Its okay, I’m with you.”
It’s okay.
I’m with you.
A contest entry
- September is Suicide Awerness and Pervention Month by FallenFromGrace1102.
2620 points, ended October 3, 2008, 70 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - what ever u want by mcrfan322.
400 points, ended October 5, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I think it's very good, well written. I like how it tells a story. good luck in the contest,I'm sure you'll win. Your very talented!!!
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Great Write. i really liked this. keep up the awesome work. i wish you the best of luck in my contest and thank you for entering this piece. i really liked the lines:
"Running towards the darkness,
So I can find you
And say, “Its okay, I’m with you.”
It’s okay.
I’m with you. "
*~*bee*~*
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