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Last Breath... To Late!!!!

As I lay here
and slit my wrist
you all stop and stare
watch as I
the freak of the school
end my sad sad life
loveless life
lifeless life....
here comes the pain and darkness...
swallowing me whole...
in amazement
I hear the sound of crying...
I thought no one loved me
that no one cared...
the paramedics come in
they say...
we don't think she's going to make it...
some of you smile while the rest are saying,
please don't die,
forgive me...
I never meant to hurt you...
I say now it is to late
and I take my last breath!

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  • SwaGGtastic
    February 14

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    This is deep & Dark. Total other side of You.. Never felt like ending it all but i have seen *Dope Heads* end it. All In tha same. This is a Powerful write!


  • forgot2b3forgotten
    October 15, 2008
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    beatiful