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Run away with me.

Run away with me?
What a romantic notion,
Motions in the night
That take me away,
Far, far away
From this place,
This town.

Take me away
And let my dreams run wild,
Hold me close, hold me tight,
Kiss my lips,
Just let me forget.

Won't you run away with me?

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Baby, run away with me?

First poem in ages.

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  • White Tiger 96
    September 30, 2008

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    I thought you did a good job. It shows alot of emotion and talent. I look forward to reading more from you. EXCELLENT WORK!!!!!Smile


  • alexandra.
    September 30, 2008
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    Yesh, it is your first one, in a long, long time.
    ---more purleese?

    And it's still as good as your old ones.
    I really like the last three lines of the first stanza, very pretty. And the parting line, just conjures up a slightly physcotic [sp?] dolly girl in a western movie, but yeah

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