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Mist.

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3 minutes to midnight..

Shimmered mist behind me calls, liturgy of death,
clogging, choking , grasping, it seeks my final breath.
Silently, with begging steps, my only thought to flee,
yet death stalks ever closer. Please God hear my plea.

2 minutes to midnight..

I feel the touch of fingertips, caress of sweet goodbye,
my mind cries out in anguish, yet satan I defy.
Damn you devil spawn, this life I pledge to keep,
till I writhe in blackest torment and angels start to weep.

1 minute to midnight..

Surrounded by the fog, I fall upon my knees,
To plead for final mercy, if God I can appease.
Too late I begged salvation, in darkness now I lie,
as I wait for death eternal, I hear an angel sigh.

Midnight.....




               

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Artist Credit-Erlend Mork

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  • Judith Chandler
    October 3, 2008
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    weeping angels was a memorable image for me. Congrats on your gold trophy.


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    Oh this is great. I enjoyed this alot. It pulls the reader right in! Thank you for entering!


  • White Tiger 96
    September 30, 2008

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    WOW!! very emotional. I thought it was very well written and original. It was sad but kinda beautiful. I look forward to reading more from you.Smile