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The pendulum let go

He tried to catch the pendulum,
time swinging as a threat.
It seemed a serious thing,
swinging in his brain,
swirling in his mind.

But then the pendulum was gone
and he didn't try.
the disorder passed
from his brain
and he settled
and relaxed.

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    October 2, 2008
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    Very deep..very well written for the prompt. Thank you for your entry!