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Season Twined

Clouds fled
of the northern wind
as the current lead
retreating its visiter from the lake
the deer, fish entwine

shifting the forest,color

season twined.

 

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  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    October 1, 2008
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    clearly a beautiful

    picture, thank you for this entry and good luck
    Linda

    • saddie23
      October 1, 2008
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      thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comments given to my poem. Saddie23


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 30, 2008

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    This is very lovely!! you did an excellent job portraying!! Its so amzing and incredible fantastic job!! I LOVE IT!!

    • saddie23
      October 1, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment. Saddie23


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    September 30, 2008

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    This was different what I normally read. But I enjoyed it, I actually read it twice. Thank you for sharing. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~

    • saddie23
      September 30, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. I'm glad you liked it and the applaudes are a plus. Saddie23


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 30, 2008

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    Excellent

    This is a fine write. I enjoyed your imagery. You write quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.

    • saddie23
      September 30, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for your warm sentiments given. I'm glad you liked my poem.

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