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Pause

Memories filtered
    through half-lies
Darkness covers
    weary eyes
My skin crawls
    at the thought of touch
You probably think that
    I'm not worth much
You, who took
    my skin for granted
Tricked me where my feet
    were planted
I did not know
    to run away
When you invited me
    to stay
Confused by my own
    afflictions
Stairs go up
    in all directions
In time these wounds
    will subside
Without the aid
    of suicide
Pause,
    there is no time to wonder
Who's red bus
    you threw me under
Shake this anger
    off of me
All I want
    is to be free
Your face blocks
    the doors I open
These parts of me
    remain frayed and broken
Wrap me up
    in a blanket tight
Stay out
    of my dreams tonight
My pen breaks
    as it hits the floor
Unheard words
    even the score

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    I know this feeling.. a penning of such depth. Brilliantly done hun!



  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    September 30, 2008

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    Excellent job. The subject matter is sad. The attitude is inspiring. I like these lines alot:

    In time these wounds
    will subside
    Without the aid
    of suicide

    This is a very good poem. I liked the rhyme and the flow.

    Mike