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Shadow of the Day

Sunny days of the present are surprising
Rainy nights of the past fade away
But, the clouds of the future change from time to time
The seasons can warm your heart or shatter it
Elements control your emotions day after day
This world may be a gift from God
But, why is it so unstable?
Seeing colors
Hearing words
Touching surroundings
This place is slowly going from the light of day to the darkness of night
But, it stops in the middle...
Is it... twilight?
Is it... an eclipse?
No... it's the shadow of the day

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Linkin Park - Shadow of the day

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    a nice piece

  • piccola silver member
    October 7, 2008

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    I really like this. It presents the reader with questions to ponder and the answer i really like a lot. thank you for entering.


  • Skittle Girl
    September 30, 2008

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    awesome poem I love it plus it has the same name of one of linkin parks songs yayz keep the good work up and I like your profile picture