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Your Smiles (Hay(na)ku)

Your
smiles beguile
make life worthwhile

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Samplette gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    I like the haynaku form, and you do it well. A nice piece that makes me smile. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    September 30, 2008

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    Sweet haiku brings a smile and as always enjoy reading your haiku/poems because of the humor! Good luck in the contest!