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I use my image to express myself
and I dance along the edge of a page.
Astoundingly I think that I’m an elf,
an elf that thinks the Internet’s her stage.

I love to read fantastic poetry,
it makes me want to do my little dance
and if you write with perfect clarity,
I will appear and put you in a trance.

So if you see me dancing on your verse,
your poem is simply better than the rest.
I’m happy I could use it to rehearse,
for when you  win the poetry contest.

So when you see my dancing avatar,
you know your poem will win the big cigar.

 

 

 

 

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  • JustADutchie gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Congrats on the Silver. Very lovely and vivid avatar you've choosen. Hope you'll dance to one of my poems one day.


  • Kari gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Lol this is really really cute and it gave me a giggle. Thanks


  • Age of Rain
    October 15, 2008

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    Hahahahah. I love the end. You entertain the reader as often as you drive them to awe with your poetic brilliance. This read like you were performing. I loved it.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 14, 2008

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    This is so cute and a lovely poem
    to go along with your avatar my friend!
    Truly an entertaining and captivating
    one! Good luck to you in this contest.




    Jeremy0826


  • Tirrell
    October 2, 2008

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    This is a highly entertaining write!, You and Michael simple amaze me with the words you weave, and imagery, scenery and characterazitions... it is a pleasure to be reading.


  • toomysterious
    October 1, 2008
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    Very interesting and captivating avatar and the poem is perfectly descriptive.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 1, 2008
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    Beautiful treo

    Author, poem and avatar


  • Kappa Pyua
    September 30, 2008

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    This is awsome. Great job, sound like you to the very end. nothing could be better than seeing you dancing on my words, lol. Thanks for sharing UNT.

  • jadeangyal
    September 30, 2008
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    Your avatar is very cool--a perfect match for your poetry.


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    I just adore your avatar. It brightens my day whenever I see it. And your poetry is just as spectacular as you are. Your talent is out of this world!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    Hehe very sweet sis! This is such a cute poem and I just love your avatar. Everytime I see it it gives me a big

    Wonderful!


  • Tercil gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    My idea of an avatar, shows a very romantic woman with the modest attributes a virutous woman like you has going for her. You are very unique and are highly regarded by me as a superb adertisment for a woman. I don't smoke, so don't need the cigar, but I could take in lots of Amera poetry.


  • dame de la riviere
    September 30, 2008
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    This is cute...and your li'l picture is adorable.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    I would like to comment, but someone put me in a trance ...

    (Great sonnet though )


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 30, 2008

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    Yhis is excellent!!! Your Avatar is perfect!! I love the way you used your imagination and creativity in this one!!! You did a wonderful job with the details and description in this piece!! I LOVE IT!!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    I love your avatar, but sometimes a cigar is just a cigar (or so Freud said).

    Look after these bunnies while I make some supper.


  • Rovingone gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    Your little dancer is always the high point of my viewing day and your poetry is the greatest gift. Always love it! This is just another example of the talent you have.

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