I Felt Peace like no Other by Wings of Insanity at All poetry

I fell not knowing where I was
only thing I could see was the
darkness beneath my feet
I was scared but satisfied all at once
I felt peace like no other
My life flashed before my very eyes
only to reveal that the life i lived
with my friends, family, and love...
was nothing but a dream of madness
I seen my world before it happen
I seen my life before i died
I seen my cries of lust,hate,and pain...
It was all just an illusion of chaos to me
and an oasis of pure lies

I hated myself for not knowing
That I didn't see this coming
I hated myself for not
Looking farther then what I did

All this hate and anger I felt
was kinda pathetic to the mind

I felt the demon growing impatient
with every thought that grazed my mind
I felt it taking me alive
Consuming me in its watery grave of rioting souls
Devouring me...
from the inside and out

I created it...
I created it from my emptiness
Inside me
It was coming alive
and wanted out
of this body that trapped it so long
It wanted to live
(cries)
It wanted to exist
It wanted to take my pain away

Only thing standing in the way
was only a decision...
"Should I let this demon take over
destroying the world that I locked myself
away from, hiding in closets and shit...just to shut
out the insane cries and screams that filled my head
of these tortured souls?"

I once heard that it only takes
a funeral to make you see that
life is beautiful...

Is that really true...
It only takes a funeral?

Author notes

I don't know...if this poem deserves any notes

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demonic66
October 3, 2008

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i like it
but dont do it
Aj264
October 2, 2008
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It only takes a lifetime...Get busy livin' or get busy dying...
i will die
October 2, 2008
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stupid wannabe
- kitty23
  December 6, 2008
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  This is caitlyn stop fucking with jessica before you get your ass beat for real
  I'm not playing
  your doing this because she can't come down here and beat your ass but i'm already here bitch and i will do it
- Wings of Insanity
  October 3, 2008
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  Chienne!!!
  I will die...
  
  Hey...
  you Chienne (french)...stay the hell of my damn page I don't need you judging my damn work...cause you don't know shit about me. I thought i finally got rid of ur ass, but some how...you just can't let things be. (touches my temples and sighs) Shows how pathetic you can be at times. Its been months since we last talked, and yet..you must find it irresistable to stop talking to me, even after i moved...Nasheili...*sigh* I don't have the time or patience to argue with any longer, even though it seems pleasing, it worthless. Hmp...I have better thing to worry about. If you don't have a real comment about my work...dont do it at all. This is really pathetic...
  
  -misa-
Boxingboy
September 30, 2008

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yeah it does it's true
mick my instructor
hm he was awsome funny a pain in the butt but he was cool i liked he was good to me and when he died it's hard i mean i know he's still around me because it's a feeling i get like when he would always yell and shout "GET UP YOU SON OF A BITCH GET UP OR THE IDIOT WINS OH AND DID I MENTION HE CALLED YOU A SISY GET UP"
man it was fun though could have used it with out the son of a bitch part but okay

but yeah it's true you see life more better after a funeral because you say good bye to the body and you think about your loved ones the people or person you hold dearest to your heart and you think i have a perpose i'll live another 90 years instead of following

and it just has to be one or maybe a very good memory or maybe a vision of the future a good one

but it just has to be one a very very good one

just like for me it's you and rach and the very few true friends that i have but the main ones are the two of you