Mr. Man, is serving detention
I can't fit my face through his bars
An angry man needs attention.
Mrs. Man claims it's prevention
Makes that nigger hide his scars
Mr. Man, is serving detention
I'm at home with incarceration
Why should I get to count stars?
An angry man needs attention.
I watched you give freedom a C-section
Behind black windowed bullet proof cars
Mr. Man, is serving detention.
A New-World-Order is in gestation
Invented between their bogies, and pars.
An angry man needs attention.
A Vilanelle for your contemplation
I refuse to rhyme those above with wars.
Mr. Man, is serving detention.
An angry man needs attention.
Author notes
I'm not afraid to tell Bush and Ashcroft and Cheney that they are thieves and liars and not worth the bloody baby oil they lube up their tight white asses with. Cock sucking pack of hyenna Republican traitors to all that's humane and solemn, Assholes that don't give a shit, the worst kind.
Written January 24th, 2004
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the dark bottom niche you run still sports a spark of what is still available to us, all be it less and less, freedom in our words. the use of the beautiful vilanelle does throw me off on this one - i don't think they deserve such position even if your words cut. makes my heart sad to see a vilanelle dirtied up with them.
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excellent write, it was wonderfully written. i wish i had the attention span to write a villanelle...yours is excellent. good luck in the contest, great write thanks for sharing.
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Wow- what an intense poem! I have always been a fan of the villanelle! Wonderful write and perfectly suited for my contest- thank you!
Trin -
I fell a long time ago. I run the bottom, I am the darkest part of the niche.
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Now would you be talking about the nigger in the white house or just your average everyday low life scum that is put behind bars because of his scandelous behavior. Cause for sure you know those prick fuckers in the upper class won't suffer a day behind bars nor will they ever be part of anything less than dignitarinism.(don't know if that's a real word, but I'm sure you get the drift) Great write my friend. Your style is wee a bit over the edge, hope you don't fall of that cliff on your ass...could be a long way down. I agree politically to the fullest with your comment.
Ja
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this one I like I feel ya on your authors comments big time fck bush -
Awww sweetie this one was really great i lov the way you did this as usual all your poems are insanely odd and perfect..DAMN YOU AND YOUR TALENT...asss. Your awesome and i just like this waaay to much good job choder!
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