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Knocked over smoothly by your art




A flight in air, my spirit free,
roaming skies, my love you'll be.
Colourful, in splash of ink,
deep in your heart, my soul will sink.

A watching eye, protectively,
in flight of love, I can be me.
Down hill to top, our lifes progress,
with no more secrets to confess.

When life will end, I'll roam the air,
my spirit free in loving care.
I'm a raptor, but dove by heart,
knocked over smoothly by your art.

 

 

 

 

 

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Option 3. My avatar is an aquarelle, made by my husband. To me it represents freedom in all aspects and that's why I think it is the best avatar for me.

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken gold member
    November 24
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    The picture and the background are amazing as well as the write.

    I loved this part:

    When life will end, I'll roam the air,
    my spirit free in loving care.
    I'm a raptor, but dove by heart,
    knocked over smoothly by your art.


    Thanks so much for the lovely entry & good luck in the contest!


  • Hihamburger
    December 10, 2008
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    Wow I love this! It is so so pretty I just don't know how to describe it.


  • ronnica
    October 19, 2008

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    You have complimented each other beautifully,
    The words say it all, I couldn't even pick a fav line
    they all fill the imagination. Perfect


  • waydownuponjoy
    October 18, 2008

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    Congratulations ...

    for your Gold & trophy ... not to mention your metaphoric poem that rhymes nicely ... and I see you have a new-to-me avatar and I love it. Bravo to the artist as well! j y


  • Kari gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Wow, this almost brought tears to my eyes...so beautiful and very touching. Thanks so much...


    • JustADutchie gold member
      October 18, 2008
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      Thanks Kari, for granting me the Gold. I'll pass it on to my hubby, cause he made this beautiful piece of Art.

      ~Titia~


  • tawk gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    Wow what an amazing avatar!! Your beautiful words go so well with it. I so enjoyed reading your masterpiece this morning. Thanks for sharing. Hugs Theresa


  • grannyeri gold member
    October 14, 2008

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    Enjoyed this presentation- color and picture, then the poem. I always thought an avatar was a moving creation, but maybe I am mistaken. Think this suits the picture perfectly.

    • JustADutchie gold member
      October 15, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment. Could be that an avatar is a moving creation, I really wouldn't know, but Hekate called it that way, so who am I to question that. LOL I'm just a Dutchie and wouldn't even know if there's a word for it in my language.


  • lianonsidhe silver member
    September 30, 2008
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    I love this picture! Your husband is very talented!

  • ea silver member
    September 30, 2008

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    wow, that's neat that your husband painted this charming piece. What type of a hawk is it? Lovely.

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