My eyes were blinded by enemies
I was paralized by a world of hate
My days were covered in darkness
My fears had sealed my fate
My mind was shattered in pieces
I was crushed and broken inside
Lost in a world of madness
My spirit just wanted to hide
Isolated from the dreams of morning
My glory had turned to shame
Hurt and forgotten by others
No one remembered my name
Torn to shreds my heart was cold
I was lost in confusion and strife
Until the bright rays of dawn appeared
And you entered into my life
A contest entry
- ANYTHING .... but. by written-in-ink.
1000 points, ended October 19, 2008, 17 entries
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:D I LOVE IT!
SO sweet and cute and special... unique and and and I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!! THANK YOU SO MUCH TRULY I LOVE THIS ENTRY! -
again a great uplifting poem it was really just sweet went from dark to light like a night sky to morning
great work -
i liked it
i thought that ou did a good job with this and
i am glad that you decided to share it with me
thank you so much and good luck -
I really like this poem, I can realte a lot.. but this poem probably haves a different effect on everyone.. Keep penning
♥always Kate
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Really like this one, brings about memories of being saved and then, of course, throwing it away. Perhaps I'll get it right one of these days. Writing like this tends to give one hope.
excellent write and thank you for putting it up.
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Good write!! Good luck in your contest
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