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wonderland

in the middle of this cold black and white tiled room,
there is a glass table,
there is a glass bottle centered on top,
filled with a crimson red liquid,
the label reads drink me,
should i dare to drink it,
i mean i don't even know what it contains,
i send my doubts to the back of my head,
and grasp the bottle with one hand,
and remove the glass lid,
and take a sip,
i don't feel any different,
and it taste's like sweet red cordial,
so i drink more,
has my hands start to increase there size,
i drop the bottle,
im growing,
finally im to big for this room,
i cant move,
this hurts,
tears begin to roll,
flooding the floor beneth,
the tears just keep on falling,
and the water keeps on rising,
theres a box,
labeled eat me,
do i dear after what happened last time,
what could happen now,
i open it up and peek inside,
there cookies,
i grab one,
the size of my largely grown hand,
and take a bite,
mmmmm chocolate,
its amazing im shrinking,
i finally stop,
oh know im smaller than i was before,
i can fit under this door,
it leads to a garden,
a beautifully arranged garden,
red rose's and walking talking cards,
there like people,
am i in WONDERLAND?? 

 

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