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not today

when your mind finally lights up
when your heart starts to cheer
life will always find a way to stop
every source of happiness that lays near
drops the black Vail
limit your sense of sight
inspire you to fail
and weaken your strength to give up your fight

the answer lays beyond the sharp head
you don't have to be smart to move ahead
just break through your way
through the dead end
you'll see the light
you'll meet the friend
that'll stay near you
and guide your way
you're not alone after all
you'll see that
but not today

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  • The Dancing Heart
    September 30, 2008
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    u know what i really like about this poem ..
    it describes the whole situation .. doesn't say much details .. and what i like more is that i wrote this during the dark days .. during the whole event .. and meeting the frnd .. was the only hope i had back then ..
    and while writing this poem , i was in pain , but i was writing it talking 2 myself ,.. 2 make myself feel good , feel better ... i was being a good frnd 2 myself, lol!
    and thats what really happened ,..i did what i told myself 2 do in the poem .. and the last few lines did happen ..