You drew me,
From the love you gave
You sketched my being,
Started to engrave
The soul you were seeing.
And with my hand
I shaped you too,
I watched you as
Your soul grew,
And we were each created anew.
A contest entry
- "This statement is a lie." by PatheticKt.
300 points, ended September 30, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
this is really sweet about you and your bf. nicely done!!
-
Ahh, lovely write
A theme that can really be summarize into this line: Two lovers are one whole body . . . ermm, something like that
Simple yet sentimental piece you got here, indeed
Adding your comment:
