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River Wide ##

River wide

of my life

Run, roll

and cease not ever

Upon her face

print my worth

in pure crystal water

Oh river, river full of hurts

river of many feelings

Has she not held you in her arms

and guide you to the fountain

There! where love prevails

above all

and dreamy eyes water

where stary passings lead

to worlds

of beaut beyond compare

Oh river, river run and roll

to seas of peace and light

But never ever, do forget

Your hand ,She held

with tender, loving care.

 

 

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  • Ani Grace
    November 15
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    You must know, of course, what I think of this.
    A beautiful poem, indeed.
    Ani


  • pain in colorado
    January 20

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    Well done. Nice Imagery

    I love the imagery of this part of the poem.

    There! where love prevails
    above all
    and dreamy eyes water
    where stary passings lead
    to worlds


  • Erica Carnea
    November 26, 2008

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    Oh river, river full of hurts

    river of many feelings

    Has she not held you in her arms

    and guide you to the fountain


    this is really good


  • rhondasail
    November 12, 2008

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    Oh river, river run and roll

    to seas of peace and light...

    These lines are filled with hope...You write of the river with passion and acceptance, and yet the pain is there too...muted, but there. Wonderful write, my friend. Peace to you always, and many thanks for your kind words in comment upon my own words. Rhonda


  • xxleannexx
    October 5, 2008
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    where stary passings lead

    to worlds

    of beaut beyond compare

    amazing!


  • Jalalbad gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    Lovely poem.
    starry passings lead to worlds yet not discovered and to them yet to be created.


    • Angelo di Luce gold member
      September 30, 2008

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      You are right love
      Is a fantastic idea to think off
      That is why the other one went bonkers
      Thanks for commenting
      Love you

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