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Ten Miracles To Change The World...ok so I lied

R eligious Superheroes,like me,often have no mention
  in the local papers
  tis sad but true
  unless its featured in the 'Lost & Found' column.

A lbeit if by some slight chance
  an actual miracle
  should actually have the
  nerve to be sucessful
  then I would have some serious explaining to do.

W ell the general public are all very grateful
  that most

R eligious Superheroes,like me, actually confine
  our antics to Sundays
  ONLY.

...just a thought,in case you missed my message last Sunday..
A Rabbi,Catholic nun and a Jehovah
all called upon God in their hour of need.
Who was answered first?
Alas,none of the three as
God was with Bob in Atlantic City sipping a G&T....

Author notes

This is option 7 ...lol sorry Kyle

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    On first impression.. the word 'bizarre' comes to mind

    But then I re-read it, and it is priceless The pure originality of this poem blew me away and I quite enjoyed the story. Also, the subtle humour is extremely clever! Very well done and good luck!

    also, could you please put your option number in your Author Notes? I know it's annoying, but it's the rules

  • Bob Fox
    September 30, 2008

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    Lol

    Oh boy you got me on this. especially the ending. But I must say He is not a good gambler and we drank Jack and club soda. Laughing now gal. Oh so nice. But i promise I will behave.