my heart was filled with love,
the day i first saw your smile.
with those cute sparkling eyes,
how i feel sincerity from you my love.
your warm hug and intimate kiss,
how it melted my whole being.
my life has never been like this,
happy and deeply in love to you.
the sweet touch of your soft palm,
made me feel so special my love.
for now we own each others heart,
with happiness in each others arms.
how i wish we could be in a place,
where nobody recognizes the two of us.
a place where just only you and me,
tickling each others heart by love.
i want to be in a place with fresh air,
maybe near the beach with white sand.
not too sunny but better if its cloudy,
feeling the coolness of the clear blue sea.
our room will be full of ambiance,
just fit to fill it with romance.
we will look each others tantalizing eyes,
and slowly kiss intimately with love.
we'll be covered with the blanket,
blanket of love that binds the two of us.
wrapping us together as one,
hugging together with each others arms.
i love you more every single second my love,
and i offer to you myself with all my heart.
no i don't know how to live without you baby,
i'll cry like ocean without you in my life.
i'll bring to you the best that i can give,
i'll give you the sweetest love that i have.
full trust, loyalty and love are our foundations,
with faith in God we are loving each other.
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Comments
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awww this is soo beautiful ^_^ it really made me feel warm and fuzzy inside I love this alot it's so romantic
and sweet. the expressing was delightful the way you show the love was amazing the flow is great this poem made me feel so much love and warm feeling inside all at once I wanted to scream because I feel this way about him hope he realize that I'd die without him but yeah anyway good job my favorite lines were "i love you more every single second my love,
and i offer to you myself with all my heart.
no i don't know how to live without you baby,
i'll cry like ocean without you in my life.
i'll bring to you the best that i can give,
i'll give you the sweetest love that i have.
full trust, loyalty and love are our foundations,
with faith in God we are loving each other" but really I loved the whole poem wow thanks again for sharing this lovely piece and for entering good luck 
love and many blessing ~Maria~
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Very pretty sentiments! Love the picture you painted here. Soft romance with such wonder!!! Thanks for sharing!!!
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